PunishedOne's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tekno's Action Tutorial]

Excellent

I've never added recoil in my Flashes, since I never knew how to add it. Now you've shown me how to animate recoil.

TeknoGames responds:

thankyou I did didn't I

[Warhammer 40,000 Tribute]

Bleh....

The Space Marine was the only thing well done in the entire Flash. Everything else sucked.

Add sound effects, and fix those drawings!

GhostEmperor responds:

Again, I am certainly going to have to update this flash. Thanks for the negative feedback, nice to hear anything from NG users!

[A Forgotten Samurai]

Short, but well animated.

First off, doing the lines across the screen with slicing sounds is a horrible excuse for a slicing animation. Just do the damn thing, it'll look better. This was I believe only 30 seconds long, and only one death scene.

r4godofsun responds:

its not as easy as you make it sound

[Flash Drawing tutorial]

W.O.W.!

Just INCREDIBLE! You have now DEFINATELY bumped me up from my Raymen to fully-drawn characters. Good work! This is going in my favorites for future reference! You have showed me 2 new things I never knew before.

5-7 responds:

;) thanks dude! Behold! there will be more tutorial thanks for you! thanks for your vote!

[Lock Hawk Down Part One]

Very nice!

3 things prevented me from giving this a 10.

1. NEVER, EVER MAKE ANYONE PULL THE M4's bolt! It will make the current round inside the chamber fire, due to a new one coming in.

2. Where were the muzzle flashes? That's a vital part for Military Flashes, as it shows when someone is firing.

3. No casing flying out= not military enough. Have you ever seen that in all war movies that they have casing flying out? Along with correct reloads? Do that.

Rho-VIII responds:

1. No, if it's a brand new M4, never been used before, or if someone put a brand new mag in when they've depleted all their ammo, a bullet is not placed in the chamber, therefore requiring the user to pull back the bolt to open the chamber and place a round in, ready to fire.

2. Personally I don't like muzzle flashes, as in real life they rarely appear, it's just a black smoke puffs out of the barrel. And I can't draw them well :-P.

3. Good idea, I might put a shell ejection movie clip next time. Thanks!

[2 Violent Shorts]

How the hell did this get past the Portal?

Seriously, how? You don't deserve the B+ batting average. You had a C+, I remember. It was brought up because you joined COLLABS!

Anyway, this was around 10 seconds long. How can that get past the Portal?

Livecorpse responds:

well my bat avg went from c+ to b+ after i deleted 64 out of 149 flashes, a couple months ago., those collabs were fun but they didnt raise it very much.
thx for the review

[Hysteria]

Enough with the fucking collabs

Ever since the TTs came along, everything started to say "OMG! WE MUST START MAKING COLLABS!".

I've had enough of these damn things.
And stop spamming the portal with your crap, J!

A resistance group is growing, and you know it.

J-Smooth responds:

Ok well... the original movie came out before NGTT so go suck a dick... trick.

[Samegame:High on Speed]

Decent, better then crap

There wasn't any "real" animating. In my eye, looked like mostly tweens. The sound was horrible quality.

Overall, it's better then all those 5 second, 3 meg stick flashes coming in every day.

LAVAGASM responds:

You are my favorite artist becuz u rock

[Battlefield Mini]

Decent enough....

Where was the credit for Philljc? He made your SA-80, M4, M1, and the Apache. I didn't see any credit.

Overall, too short, a bit choppy on the animating.

TvP responds:

Ya sorry didn't make it real big. Its in the movie description.

[The Last Swordsman]

Decent

Much better then all the crap floating around here. I saw your alpha, and it just gave me a thought about this. Fix your drawing skills, and get a better mic, PLEASE. The slicing animation looked like it was cut-n'-paste. That will lower your score.

wallpaperman responds:

what do you mean cut and paste? as in the same move over and over? thanks for the tip =)