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Decent

Work on your animating. Judging from what I've seen it's all tweens. Overall, you've got potential. The music was low quality, it sounds like it was recorded from your TV. Add some sounds, and fix your animating.

FINAAAAALFAAAN responds:

i m good at drawing , and some time maybe too lazy to draw all the move in different position ;p

Smells like someone was inspired by me

#1, NEVER use real life pictures for backgrounds.

#2, I think you saw my beta .swf of Path of the Katana, so you decided to make a ninja movie.

#3, do some ACTUAL fighting besides tweens and very little FBF.

Piconjo responds:

smells like someone thinks too greatly of themself.
1) ive never watched your crappy movie.
2) ill never watch it either.

and most inportantly...

3) piconjo pwns j00.

;)

Original!

Hehehe! You've cheered me up again! Now, were you inspired by Finding Nemo? It seems you were.

Clear voices, excellent glow, and nice plot too.

SeizureDog responds:

interestingly enough, I wasn't. the idea came when thinking of places that take place in a black background and I say. "hey, deep sea is black, now where can I go from there?" and thus "hell" was born :P

Seizure_Dog, yours was the best!

THANK YOU FOR ENTERING IT! You've made my day!

LiveCorpse: The usual over-exaggerated blood. Nothing new.

PoopMoose: That was, wierd. Gradients seem to take away from the graphics, because the clothes had gradients.

Crazy_Chihuahua: This was original. Blockbuster people coming after the main char.

Freak_Show7: Good beginning. Wierd ending.

Seizure_Dog: THE BEST ONE! Main Madness char rants about why he kills everyone, and he tries to kill the green one with a rabbit.

Livecorpse responds:

Well, thanks for your most helpful review.

Sweet humor!

Where was I in the artists? Well?

Graphics 7:

Decent drawings. Excellent lip-synching made it jump from a 5 to a 7. Fix up your backgrounds, and add shading.

Sound 8:

Voices are loud and clear enough to understand it. Some of it was muffled, or spoken too fast.

Interactivity 0:
No buttons, no menu.

Style 9:
Your style would greatly improve if you added shading and gradients. So far, good stuff.

Violence 3:
Some brief violent moments, especially during the Zhu part.

Humor 10:
This is where you shined! "I will cook their bodies with ancient Chinese methods", "I uh, uh, forget to feed uh, uh, my DENTAL PLAN!" "Uh, he's not going to be here, he's out for lunch, he's not killing kids with a shotgun, no he's out for lunch." "You already know too much, RUN MICKEY MOUSE!" "Drink I said I say, only 72 hours and 52 minutes, Esse I'm loco."

So many quotes, so little space.

Overall 8:
You've got the basics down for a good parody Flash, but you need to work on a few things.

frontrow responds:

thanks, maybe one of these days i will make like a "deleted scenes" and make fun of more artists, and make fun of u, and use shading, thanks for the tips

Rap sucks ass

And you just killed an excellent classic by featuring this crap.

NARDZ responds:

Sorry I was thinking about putting some of my metallica, Rob Zombie Or even some disturbed In it But I thought it would Be funny with this music.

Excellent animating, too slow

Pick up the pace. Are you running it on 12 FPS? It's going way slow. Now, if only you added splattering blood instead of clouds.

Finlander responds:

The FPS is 75 and it runs smooth on my browser !

This is why AOL sucks!

DAMN POP-UP STOPPER!

Thank god I have Mozilla, which has built-in pop-up killers, so I never get any!

THIS IS ORIGINAL

SeiyruRenaih responds:

Can I get an amen!? ::church crowd chants 'amen'::

PERFECTED STICKS AT IT'S BEST!

This is going on my favorites! I LOVE the blood!

WX responds:

YAY! thanks

I should stop begging you for the .swf now

Cause it's right here! Good work! Goldman's voice r0xx0rz!

Sqeezy responds:

yarr... simon did the voice

3/30/07 Production has started for real this time. I now have a full week to work on Red Zero. The first thing I'm going to do is finish up the script. From where I left off, it's 70% complete.

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