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Original!

Hehehe! You've cheered me up again! Now, were you inspired by Finding Nemo? It seems you were.

Clear voices, excellent glow, and nice plot too.

SeizureDog responds:

interestingly enough, I wasn't. the idea came when thinking of places that take place in a black background and I say. "hey, deep sea is black, now where can I go from there?" and thus "hell" was born :P

Seizure_Dog, yours was the best!

THANK YOU FOR ENTERING IT! You've made my day!

LiveCorpse: The usual over-exaggerated blood. Nothing new.

PoopMoose: That was, wierd. Gradients seem to take away from the graphics, because the clothes had gradients.

Crazy_Chihuahua: This was original. Blockbuster people coming after the main char.

Freak_Show7: Good beginning. Wierd ending.

Seizure_Dog: THE BEST ONE! Main Madness char rants about why he kills everyone, and he tries to kill the green one with a rabbit.

Livecorpse responds:

Well, thanks for your most helpful review.

Sweet humor!

Where was I in the artists? Well?

Graphics 7:

Decent drawings. Excellent lip-synching made it jump from a 5 to a 7. Fix up your backgrounds, and add shading.

Sound 8:

Voices are loud and clear enough to understand it. Some of it was muffled, or spoken too fast.

Interactivity 0:
No buttons, no menu.

Style 9:
Your style would greatly improve if you added shading and gradients. So far, good stuff.

Violence 3:
Some brief violent moments, especially during the Zhu part.

Humor 10:
This is where you shined! "I will cook their bodies with ancient Chinese methods", "I uh, uh, forget to feed uh, uh, my DENTAL PLAN!" "Uh, he's not going to be here, he's out for lunch, he's not killing kids with a shotgun, no he's out for lunch." "You already know too much, RUN MICKEY MOUSE!" "Drink I said I say, only 72 hours and 52 minutes, Esse I'm loco."

So many quotes, so little space.

Overall 8:
You've got the basics down for a good parody Flash, but you need to work on a few things.

frontrow responds:

thanks, maybe one of these days i will make like a "deleted scenes" and make fun of more artists, and make fun of u, and use shading, thanks for the tips

HOLY SHIT! THAT WAS WIERD!

God damn, nice use of random. This was insanely WIERD. Yet, original.

Different, but boring as hell.

This is different from other Flashes. Yet, boring as well because it's in a different language, and it's almost like a summary. This was described like a history book, which is immensely BORING.

You need LOTS of work.

Wow, you suck more then my sticks. You've got animating and drawings down, now all you need is good plot and action scenes. Get something original. Not everyone is perfect, so keep practicing.

Rap sucks ass

And you just killed an excellent classic by featuring this crap.

NARDZ responds:

Sorry I was thinking about putting some of my metallica, Rob Zombie Or even some disturbed In it But I thought it would Be funny with this music.

Excellent animating, too slow

Pick up the pace. Are you running it on 12 FPS? It's going way slow. Now, if only you added splattering blood instead of clouds.

Finlander responds:

The FPS is 75 and it runs smooth on my browser !

This is why AOL sucks!

DAMN POP-UP STOPPER!

Thank god I have Mozilla, which has built-in pop-up killers, so I never get any!

THIS IS ORIGINAL

SeiyruRenaih responds:

Can I get an amen!? ::church crowd chants 'amen'::

This makes the rest of us look BAD

I give you a 3 just because of effort. If your learning Flash and your thinking of joining #3, DON'T. This will ruin your Flash skills. Become good, THEN join the next one.

3/30/07 Production has started for real this time. I now have a full week to work on Red Zero. The first thing I'm going to do is finish up the script. From where I left off, it's 70% complete.

Age 33, Male

Miami-FL

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